Polish your manuscript for publication.
Tackle the revision process with expert developmental editing,
a high-level story analysis, and actionable step-by-step feedback.
Work with me
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Work with me ☆
Developemental Editing is the right service for you if:
☆ you’ve got a 1st draft, 100th draft or anything in between.
☆ you want to find out if your story works on all levels.
☆ you want to polish your story for either self-publication or querying.
☆ you need clear, actionable feedback and a clear revision plan that you’re just not getting from beta readers or friends.
☆ you already started querying and you’re getting full manuscript requests—but ultimately no bites.
Here’s what you’ll get
Editorial Letter
A high-level, comprehensive review of your story to determine what’s working, what could use tweaking, and actionable next steps.
Market Analysis
A peek into what agents and readers currently seek in your genre, suggested word count, and a short list of comparative titles.
In-Line Feedback
Constructive and kind in-line Google Doc comments included directly in your story to explain what’s working at the scene level.
Follow-Up Call
A 1:1 with yours truly to discuss any feedback questions or new ideas. You’ll leave with a clear idea of how to begin the revision process.
Extra Resources
Additional workbooks, writing materials, genre cheat-sheets, and other personalized resources for you and your story.
A Developmental Edit is NOT a good idea for you if:
☆ you’re seeking spelling, grammar, line-editing, copy editing, or proofreading.
☆ you write non-fiction, picture books, memoir, essays, or poetry.
☆ you’re unwilling to do a major overhaul.
☆ you’re not open to feedback or constructive criticism.
☆ you’re not interested in genre conventions.
Here’s how it works
Step 1.
Submit your completed draft. Make sure your draft is the version you want me to review, as you can only submit one draft per editing round.
Step 2.
I will analyze your story in 3-4 weeks. At the end, you’ll receive a big picture analysis, an editorial letter and in-line feedback.
Step 3.
Take a few days to review all of the deliverables, considering what feedback best resonates with you and record any questions that pop up.
Step 4.
Hop on a 1:1 call with me to discuss any questions you have about my feedback. You’ll leave the call with actionable next steps to carry into your revisions!
“I wouldn't have the confidence to even consider publishing someday if not for the wonderful encouraging feedback and interest I received. The amount of feedback was impressive and much needed, and I would say it was worth every cent.”
– Ronnie, Queer Paranomal Crime
“I’ve worked with many editors but have never come across a process as professional, organized, and thorough as yours. For instance, including these follow up emails, a follow up call, and offering yourself for post-edit feedback is so thorough, and I love it. I wouldn’t change a thing.”
– Nicole, Dark Romance
“The checklist of how [my co-writer and I] compared to current published works/tropes was incredibly helpful. I'm not personally very good at fitting into genre styles, so having a sort of guide to help see how in-line we were with current trends, topics, styles, etc. really helped me focus on what needed improvement and what we did well.”
– Jessica, Queer Fantasy Romance
Developmental Editing Services
Full Developmental Edit
Perfect for writers who need the
full works on their manuscript.
✅ Editorial Letter
✅ In-Line Developmental Edits
on Every Chapter
✅ 60 minute Feedback Call
✅ Additional Resources
Manuscript Evaluation
Perfect for writers who need a
high-level, lighter touch review.
✅ Editorial Letter
✅ In-Line Developmental Edits
on First 6,000 Words
✅ 60 minute Feedback Call
✅ Additional Resources
Pricing
Full Developmental Edit
40,000 words or less
Manuscript Evaluation
$1117
$687
60,000 words or less
$1657
$837
80,000 words or less
$2197
$1117
100,000 words or less
$2737
$1397
120,000 words or less
$3277
$1677
120,000 words or more
Custom
Custom
For a manuscript exceeding 120,000 words, contact Hannah for a direct quote.
Frequently Asked Questions
Got a question? Check out the replies to my most frequent queries.
For any outstanding questions, contact me with your full inquiry.
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That depends on your budget and how much support your story needs.
Manuscript Evaluations are best for writers who need a high-level review of their manuscript before revising. These writers typically submit an earlier draft or need help sorting out large developmental problems.
Full Developmental Edits are best for writers who need that extra intensive feedback before revising. These writers typically submit a polished draft or are gearing up to self-publish soon.
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Depending on your spot on the waitlist, we can get started working together anywhere from this week to a few months down the line.
Manuscript Evaluations typically take 3-4 weeks. Full Developmental Edits can take up to 3-5 weeks.
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No, landing an agent is never a guarantee. What I can do is help you put your best foot forward when querying agents.
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I work with Adult, YA and MG stories across Romance, Historical Fiction, Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Speculative, Thriller & Suspense, Women’s Fiction, Worldview, and LGBTQIA+ and Queer stories.
I do not work with picture books, non-fiction, memoir, essays, short stories, or poetry.
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Absolutely! Developmental Editing is the best next step for writers who need professional feedback on their story - whether they want to traditionally publish or self-publish. Either way, you want to give your reader a story you’re confident in.
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I can help you with that! If want support with revisions after your manuscript evaluation, inquire about my Manuscript Overhaul service. Writers receive 2 months of 1:1 weekly coaching on a prioritized, actionable list of revision steps and a full developmental edit on Draft #2.
Ready to finish your book?
Let’s craft your draft into a manuscript you’re confident in.